Now that I am writing a book and that too for the first time, I need some feedback on my initial pages.
The first two pages were ably dissected by the Book Club members and I was fortunate to get their feedback. The one from the member who is just about to publish the second book has been priceless.
Now that I am on page 8 and since the Club member is busy finalising the release I decided to try a few good friends and well wishers.
The feedbacks are priceless. I am grateful to them for the suggested corrections with the intend to make the book readable and better.
Best of all, I am getting a good feeling and gratefulness to the besties ❤️
Kurian 
Good luck, fellow writer!
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Thank you and good luck to you too
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Thanks
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Я бы с удовольствием помогла, но мне придется пропускать текст через переводчик, а он его портит. может разве что с сюжетом и мыслью подскажу)
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That’s very sweet of you Margo. I know it’s difficult.
Thank you for the thought. You’re a true bestie ❤️
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Are you going to give us a sneak peek, or do we have to wait a while?
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This is awesome!
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👍
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